I have not changed much, but I thought the splashes of colour looked abit too random- and therefore unprofessional- so rearranged them and also removed the flower as it was not appropriate for a multi-gender magazine- soemthing I would like mine to be.
I really love the font you've used for the masthead and how you've incorporated it in the other pages. The shape works well with the look your colour scheme gives you! Although I like your colour scheme and the idea behind it but I don't think it will attract guys too? I think the paint splats work nicely, I especially like the placement and size in the top corner. The main picture is good for the front cover, it's a really statement photo and fits the page well. I think the other picture you have used doesn't really fit to the genre and looks a little out of place.
ReplyDeleteI think your front cover is great, it shows you've thought about your target audience and taken alot of time an effort putting it all together, i like the simplicity of your front cover and i like how it isn't cluttered. Your main image looks really good, but the other picture you've used looks like it's just been put there, and looks a bit out of place.
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