Draft Double Page Spread

This is my first double page draft of mine, and I like the way it greatly inkeeps with my colour scheme- however I find the pink too overwhelming in its amount. The creative fonts at the top help keep it individual and different and so does the 'quirky' pose- two things I would like to keep in my final draft. Though aswell as being too strong a colour, I do not like that my article is not in coloums- it defies a very important magazine technique and makes the page look messy and out of order- and sloso doesn't easily shopw where the page splits.